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Student Essay

5 things that you should follow from the student essay on Hemingway’s  The Old Man and the Sea :

1.  The sentence structure is varied.

2.  The student gives detailed examples that supports their point.

3.  The conclusion leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

4.  The title is interesting and catchy.

5.  The thesis is original and brought back throughout the essay.

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